Which would be the better reading?
A. "Okay, Margo," Carla whispered softly. "You don't have to demean me." Her hand gently caressed Margo's shirt collar, absently straightening out a wrinkled lapel, as she had so many times before. Margo smiled inwardly; there would be time enough to demean Carla later.
B. "Okay, Margo," Carla whispered coldly. "You don't have to demean me." She had moved unnervingly close; close enough for Margo to see the anger flash in her eyes. Carla's hand hovered just above her shoulder. Suddenly she felt a strange tightening in her throat. The realization hit her like a ton of squiggle art: Carla was the Sith Lord.
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Okay, so that's Carla and not Skyler, because glasses and no hair flip, even though its the same top. (The pink, button-up long sleeve pullover from Land's End that is required attire if you wish a meeting with Margo.)
Why would you come before Margo in that get up if you didn't want to be demeaned?
Actual headline in today's paper: "Many faces of new 'Bond girl." The jokes began writing themselves. Skyler? Yup, many faces, so many faces.
Toots, you're out of your corn-fed mind! Skyler is wearing a Carnation Pink button-up long-sleeve pullover from Land's End, but Carla is clearly wearing SALMON. Apples and oranges!
Great readd thanks
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