
I know this bland bit of exposition is necessary for non-regular readers to get their bearings plot-wise, but when the dialogue sags, that's when the art should really sing! How about a close-up of Bobbie's deranged face? Or maybe Martin could have some kind of a reaction in the second panel--even just a BOBBLE, for goodness sake!--to his estranged ex-wife showing up out of the blue calling him a rat and shaking a gun. It's pretty shocking, right? Right Martin? Hmm? Yes? Shocking? Martin?
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On the other hand, he HAS been married to her for over 20 years. Maybe he got bobbled out. This can't be the first time she's pointed a gun at him...
Yea, he's definitely not surprised that she's got a gun on him. I don't think Gabriella is going to make an appearance because there doesn't seem to be enough room in the panel for another character. Bobbie is going to probably have a week or so of grievance airing before any shooting will go down...
The Rat Himself is wearing either a bad toupee or a cow-flop. Perhaps the bullet will get lodged in the rug (or dung). At any rate, it's probably not the first time Bobbie has called Martin a rat. For all we know, it's not the first time she's wielded a gun. Martin's probably desensitized, what with his hair being screwed on too tight.
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