Wow. For a break down, this is rather mellow. Just one stubborn tear and a couple mechanical sob...s, not even meritted by a speech bubble. I expected more, especially for Ruby! You know, like real, flat-out bawling. Snorting, choking sobs, directed into her own open (but clenched) hands. Howls of pain and remorse. Weird high-pitched whines. Maybe a brief intermission where Ruby goes into a frenzy and tears down the drapes. Then, back to the uncontrollable tears and congested, barely audible whispers of "I'm sorry Lu Ann I'm so sorry"
Or at least some bobbling!
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SOB stink lines? Single tear prison tattoos? Frank should get a consultant for these emotional strips.
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